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Dorene West's avatar

Loved this. Short but so exciting to read!

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Gillian Fletcher's avatar

I appreciate your taking the time to read it!! It was such a challenge to keep under 1000 words - thankfully the limit bumped up to 1500!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

This is a thriller, horror, wrapped in a mystery. How fantastic!

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Gillian Fletcher's avatar

Thank you so much! I wrote it in a laundromat LOL

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Obviously, an inspiring place, lol. It is fantastic.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Excellent work! I love the legend and the mystery behind the villa. The final moments were also harrowing! As a horror writer, I approve, haha!

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Gillian Fletcher's avatar

Thank you - the length proved a challenge and I wanted more words! Always verbose…

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

I had to make significant cuts to mine, haha. I did some research though and it looks like flash fiction is up to 1,500 words, so starting today I'm raising the limit!

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Devo/Murphy Carpenter's avatar

So good!

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Gillian Fletcher's avatar

Thank you so much! I enjoyed writing it and so glad you did too!!

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